One Single Impression: Movement

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I could move
Could go places--
Would circle the globe
If I had feeling
A pulse
Breath and heart
Call it life
I could move
With the just right
Electricity
A light touch
To the heart
Contact
Just enough
Heat and light
Really that's all
Just enough
And I would go

One Single Impression

Comments

  1. you indeed do have just the right electricity:

    I SING the Body electric;
    The armies of those I love engirth me, and I engirth them;
    They will not let me off till I go with them, respond to them,
    And discorrupt them, and charge them full with the charge of the Soul.

    ~whitman

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  2. follow your intuition. it will lead you to a place of excitement.

    or an inspiration would fuel you up to a magical place. :-)

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  3. Oh, what a fine poem, Sandy. I enjoy it in each word and will re-read it quietly offline.
    Have a good Sunday!

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  4. I love the delicacy of these images.

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  5. A poem pulsing with life and hope!

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  6. Just stopping to say hi!
    Love your poem!
    Be loved!

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  7. Anonymous3:12 AM

    .."A poem pulsing with life " & movement..
    many thanks..

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  8. It is all we need - that knowing.

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  9. I love the speed and rhythm of the poem! A lovely one to wake up to this Sunday.

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  10. Just right! very neat indeed

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  11. I could go and circle the globe, if only my bank account would agree with me! For now, I must be satisfied to travel virtually by internet!

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  12. This poem has enough movement to set you free.

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  13. Loved this Sandy,

    feel very much the same :)

    wishes,
    devika

    ps: I am on a break at my blogs. Hope to join soon.

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  14. Strangely melancholy... and a perfect image to go with it...

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  15. You sound like a kite ready to come away.

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  16. There's always that urge there ... I've found these days that traveling mentally is just as rewarding as the physical journal, and also takes less of a toll ...

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  17. Lovely poem. Move on, just move on.

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  18. That is really wonderful.

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  19. wonderful poem, full of adventure and hope

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  20. I love the idea of circling the globe. Here is my real link: http://deowriter.wordpress.com/2009/02/08/one-singlr-impression-movement/

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  21. Just enough. It kind of reinforces the feeling..

    movement

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  22. Indeed...there can be much movement when there is life there to give strength to one.

    We all need different sources of energy to sustain us in our journey.

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  23. I would love to blink my eyes and move wherever I desire ... visit other worlds through electronic wires .. now that would be nice.

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  24. there's such a sense of wistful long in this poem, Sandy. The "if" that says that touch that "just enough" isn't here yet. Hope it comes soon.

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  25. Each short line had sparks of desire and energy...beautiful!

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  26. Anonymous3:29 PM

    What a wonderful light touch this poem is! May you be sustained and moved with just breath and pulse.

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  27. Lovely, with a hint of longing but I sense a coming resolve on the horizon.

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  28. Really nice, with the picture hint I'd say you were too busy being time keeper to go. :-)
    ..

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  29. Hi Sandy--
    I suspect you do go...in your dreams, in your art. Your art certainly moves us...
    Many thanks, for all you do--and are.

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  30. Anonymous6:57 PM

    "I could move
    With the just right
    Electricity"

    A thoughtful poised could be, held back by a gentle, preventative but. Delicate promises of perhaps and maybe. Thank you

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  31. the short choppiness is fitting here.

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  32. can i go with You?

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  33. Very light poem with perfect rhythm. I love this poem.

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  34. Anonymous12:52 AM

    life is all wrapped up in movement... tiny bits placed everywhere... beautiful

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  35. excellent poem ... the longing and pragmetism weave together like a dance. xx, JP/deb

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  36. Anonymous8:38 AM

    Looks simple but hold great meaning within !!

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  37. Wouldn't that be great?

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  38. Smooth and delightful!

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  39. I sense a grounding I often feel..like yesterday on a long scenic drive to the other side of the Island. I couldn't seem to capture so many varying landscapes from mountain to sea? Yet, I managed those which were up close and near to me?

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  40. A perfect tribute to this wonderful prompt. Bravo Sandy, bravo!!!

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  41. Anonymous5:19 AM

    Smooth and direct
    a dream I'd like "to circle the globe"
    Hope you can someday!

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  42. I like the sensibility of time and movement in the photograph. Your poetry not only reminds, but also encourages me, of my ability to move and go places.

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  43. Anonymous7:55 AM

    Neat-reminds me of the wind-where it goes and where it comes from-no one knows.

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  44. Nicely written Sandy! I love the words "I could move- could go places"...that's what I want to do...go places. Thanks for sharing!

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  45. A beautiful expression of yearning.

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  46. Perfect poetic words to go with the photo!

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