One Single Impression: Hollow Get link Facebook Twitter Pinterest Email Other Apps By SandyCarlson - March 26, 2011 Hollow bunny,I crush you andWith my tongue Trace your contours,The illusion of substance. You are not enough.You never satisfy, Though your wrapper Is as pretty As a spring day. One Single Impression One Single Impression Get link Facebook Twitter Pinterest Email Other Apps Comments Lisa at Greenbow11:11 AMI believe the chocolate love in you has been exposed. Nothing hollow about that. The Easter Bunny will be making note of that.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyMyrna R.11:40 AMSo cute and so true. A hollow bunny, never satisfies. It makes one aware that we want substance.Have a great weekend Sandy.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyPaulie11:54 AMThat's what all chocolate lovers say! Me? I could do without. . . except I do love chocolate licorice. . .ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyHilary12:55 PMHa.. nicely done. And you've awakened a craving for chocolate.. which is never far from the surface.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyGeraldine1:17 PMLOL...how well I remember the chocolate bunnies of childhood and "off with their heads" was the first order of business! What a fun post Sandy, thank you!Happy Weekend, Gwww.takeahappybreak.comwww.myreallifereviews.comReplyDeleteRepliesReplyAnonymous2:48 PMA charming poem!ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyBirdie2:50 PMWhat a cute post. Now go out and buy some huge hunk of expensive organic chocolate and enjoy!ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyimac5:20 PMNice words and the thought of choc - delights.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyKymberly Foster Seabolt6:04 PMGreat poem and I NEED to remember this "you do not satisfy" whenever I contemplate eating things that are a moment on the lips, lifetime on the hips :)ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyGemma Wiseman7:17 PMO chocolate bunnies! Cute characters! but sadly, often with "no substance"! A fun and slightly ironic piece of writing!ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyThis Is My Blog - fishing guy9:39 PMThough I am hollowwhen in my empty brainI still try to satisfyand chocolate you insane.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyZuzana3:50 AMThis made me smile, as I agree with you. Never was much for chocolate bunnies, they appeared so mundane and I loved fillings, which they lacked.;) But the wrapping was always enticing to me thus I often kept them.;))Have a lovely Sunday,xoxoReplyDeleteRepliesReplyUnknown4:00 AMmaybe leave it for a few days & it'll multiply cute lil baby rabbits? :Pnice poem too!(stev of formerly stevblogs here btw)ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyanthonynorth4:40 AMA fun poem with a deeper metaphor within the wrapping. Excellent.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplySueann5:47 AMOh so true! I remember as a child I was always heart broken as I found the hollow bunny in my basket! Sigh!!HugsSueAnnReplyDeleteRepliesReplyUnknown6:48 AMwow! i believe some people live lives like they are hollow. as if nothing good is in them when in fact they are special.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyAnonymous10:17 AMMan, still another month away, though. Even if they're not quite as satisfying as the could/should be, there's a perverse pleasure in biting off bunny chunks. :)ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyHarshad Mehta1:42 PMCraving is not hollow. It is real, isn't it?ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyAnonymous1:49 PMOh what a fun poem! I bet you eat the ears first.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyRamesh Sood1:54 PMIt took me time to unwrap it.. wellfound it indeed very interesting.. Thanks Sandy!ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyLisa4:07 PMWhat an adorable write. I agree - those hollow chocolate bunnies just aren't enough.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyAnonymous5:48 PMA promise in the making. A joy for the senses all. How good life feels aftwards. Thank you. Please have you all a good new week.daily athens ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyThe Write Girl11:36 PMYum! Hollow bunny...delicious! I can see how this little rabbit cannot satisfy once the chocolate has been consumed. This is a delicious poem Sandy.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyPatti9:03 AMOh Snady! Perfect for the prompt- loved it! And I agree- always lured in by the outer packaging and "substance" but never enough- never! It looks like you are on Spring Break? Enjoy!!!ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyPremI1:47 PMThere is real substance in your poem, though not in the bunny...Truly admirable take on the prompt, Sandy.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyAnonymous7:37 PMsweet beautiful words!ReplyDeleteRepliesReplygabrielle10:23 PMNow if it were dark chocolate...ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyAdd commentLoad more... Post a Comment Thanks for being here.