One Single Impression: Sarcasm Get link Facebook Twitter Pinterest Email Other Apps By SandyCarlson - March 19, 2011 Words fall into the chasmBetween a mind and a heart.Whose?We wish we knew, you and I.You and I. We wish we knew.***Single leaf, dark night, chasm:Oak tree, wind:Music of solitude. One Single Impression One Single Impression Get link Facebook Twitter Pinterest Email Other Apps Comments Lin Floyd11:50 AMpowerful poem just like sarcasm...ReplyDeleteRepliesReplysgreerpitt2:21 PMI do so like this. The title, places the whole poem in a different light -- sometimes don't you just wish there was a "sarcasm font"?ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyCloudia3:09 PMVery nice one...Warm Aloha to youfrom Honolulu!Comfort Spiral><}}(°> ><}}(°>ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyPaulie3:15 PMVery picturesque!ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyA Lady's Life3:24 PMVery good Sandy.Sarcasm and chasm, oak tree, wind, leafcuts between people. and yet unity softness andstrength.Many relationships are like that. People love each other, sometimes they hurt each other through sarcasm because they know each other so well, but love prevails.You learn to accept each others faults and love is unconditional .You marry a dream and then live with realityReplyDeleteRepliesReplyAnonymous9:21 PMhauntigly beautiful !please have a good sunday.daily athens ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyAayushi Mehta1:24 AMI especially loved the first poem.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyPietro Brosio1:47 AMBoth very fine poems.I've learned a new word: "chasm", which in Italian is "abisso, baratro".Happy Sunday!ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyhttp://graceolsson.com/blog4:41 AMdear SandyI dislike sarcasm.I prefer to laughbut the poeme is beautifulnice dayhttp://graceolsson.com/blog/2011/03/the-boy-of-rio-de-janeiro/ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyanthonynorth4:58 AMPowerful, indeed.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyZuzana6:04 AMI do not know how to be sarcastic and words of sarcasm can be hurtful at times.But pain, just as happiness has to be acknowledged as it will always exist to balance our life.Beautifully poignant.Have a lovely Sunday dear Sandy,xoxoReplyDeleteRepliesReplySueann7:25 AMSarcasm can kill!! Can bring a pain that lasts a life time. Lovely poem!!!HugsSueAnnReplyDeleteRepliesReplyRamesh Sood8:10 AMIt is a delight to read you Sandy..ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyAnonymous8:37 AMsarcasm is a passionate way to react...you have depicted with images and words so well!ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyLinda Jacobs9:23 AMVery clever sarcash/chasm link! Love "chasm between mind and heart"!ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyrobkistner10:45 AM"Words fall into the chasmBetween a mind and a heart."I really like this phrase -- a lot! Well written Sandy... :)ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyAnonymous1:18 PMWonderfully poetic with such a difficult word as sarcastic.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyJim5:15 PMNice, Sandy. And more complicated that I can handle.I did figure out that sarcasm breeds chasms but hadn't thought of it with that word, chasm. ..ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyMadeleine Begun Kane5:22 PMWonderful job ... and I'm not being sarcastic. :) Mad KaneReplyDeleteRepliesReplyAmanda Moore7:33 PMvery emotional Sandy sarcasm can mean so much it can make you laugh or cry, well written!ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyKodjo Deynoo12:23 PMVery expressive way of sarcasm. Well writtenReplyDeleteRepliesReplyJingle Poetry At Washington State1:59 PMsuperb take.a poetic mind is amazing, love reading you.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyUnknown5:31 PMThis subtle and allusive piece makes quite an impression, begs a second read. Intelligently written!Here's mine:http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2011/03/21/the-proper-behavior-of-love/ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyThe Write Girl10:16 PMHi Sandy,So true. Sarcasm can create this gulf/space of misunderstanding. Your imagery always draw me in. It's wonderful to read your poetry.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyPremI3:06 AM" You and I. We wish we knew." that says everything Sandy. Loved it....ReplyDeleteRepliesReplygabrielle10:17 PMWords can gather in that chasm and live for years. This piece has a beautiful impressionistic feeling to it. Gentle and reflective.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyVinay Leo R.2:01 PMoh.. that'd be a irrecoverable fall, Sandy.. very difficult to choose from the chasm I think.. powerful take!Here's My OSIReplyDeleteRepliesReplyAnonymous12:00 AMnever realizing so much space between mind and heart and the emotions that lie there... both the dark and the light... we are really beautifully made... complex yet beautiful...ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyAdd commentLoad more... Post a Comment Thanks for being here.