One Single Impression: Uncomfortable

From July 29, 2011


This downward turn
Is the way to what I know,
Have always known,
Will always know:

That diving in with everything,
I find everything I need,
Release what I don't,
And come up
Riding the current

To it doesn't matter where;

I have everything.

When I dive,
I write my name
On the book of time.

When you watch,
You write yours.

May we do it from the pure comfort
Of my joy

Perfected over millenia
You don't know enough
To imagine.
From July 29, 2011

From July 29, 2011


I couldn't actually use the word "uncomfortable" in a poem, so I worked with the idea of it.

One Single Impression

Comments

  1. The imagery is perfect with this poem Sandy. Those downs are always uncomfortable but when we come up we are better for it.

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  2. very creative and meaningful...

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  3. I love this one!!!!

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  4. What a scary, exhilarating moment!

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  5. Thats our Sandy, overcome whatever.
    !st class post my friend

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  6. Write your name in the book of time, Sandy!



    Aloha from Waikiki;


    Comfort Spiral

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  7. Anonymous6:07 PM

    Words, emotions that dive into the innerst within, comfortable. Thank you for sharing.

    Please have a good Sunday.

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  8. diving in with everything
    releasing what doesn't serve

    thanx for the reminder

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  9. I thought it worked beautifully.
    Mad Kane

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  10. I love that last line!!! "you don't know enough to imagine". So true...we don't!!
    Love the photos and the poem!
    Hugs
    SueAnn

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  11. Beautiful sequence of the diving bird and I love the poem.

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  12. One who dares to dive knows....

    Thanks.

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  13. Indeed comfrotable to read.. I am happy to be here as usual..taking back somthing very interesting..Thank you..

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  14. Beautifully deep as always, and great pics.

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  15. Anonymous2:33 PM

    beautiful...! a complete poem Sandy!!

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  16. I always find beauty in your words. I also struggled with the word uncomfortable but I think your poem is beautiful.

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  17. A pure meditative dive...
    Joyous... comforting...

    Lovely pics,lovely flow, Sandy.

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  18. This is beautiful- as usual. The pictures and the words meld just perfectly!

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  19. Your writing is always so full of truth and wisdom. Loved this one.

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  20. Anonymous10:43 AM

    what a wonderful trip you take your readers on Sandy this is marvelous! I love Pelicans the brown is my fave so this had twice the pleasure for me because I actually spend time at the beach just to watch them dive!

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  21. Sooooo pretty, Sandy, this flight your birds does!

    We both do know that the graceful atheletic moves our performers make are not always comfortable in their making.

    I like too, your idea of the 'writing' these activites in all respects into the 'book of time.'
    ..

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