One Single Impression: Betrayal Get link Facebook Twitter Pinterest Email Other Apps By SandyCarlson - September 17, 2011 At night, the betrayal: The breeze gives way to wind, The music of insects, to the patter of falling leaves, The shower, to cold rain. We call it the fall. One Single Impression One Single Impression Get link Facebook Twitter Pinterest Email Other Apps Comments annell410:07 AMBeautiful, simple, perfect. We have known rain, in an unusual way this early fall. Oh so beautiful, the rhythms of the the day into night, night into day... and rain... is this global change?ReplyDeleteRepliesReplySylvia K12:17 PMSo much said so simply! Beautiful as always, Sandy!SylviaReplyDeleteRepliesReplyGeraldine1:25 PMSo much said, and so many interpretations that I can glean from your words. as for the fall in nature, I say bring it on!!! but that's just me. powerful word Sandy, very evocative.hugs, GReplyDeleteRepliesReplyPietro Brosio1:58 PMSimple and very lovely, Sandy!ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyimac4:10 PMwhole lot said with so little written Sandy.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyLisa at Greenbow4:30 PMSuch a betrayal I look forward at the end of each summer. That cold rain awakens my muse after it has been fried in the summer heat.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyLin Floyd4:39 PMit' s coming. we have a winter cold front right now in northern utah and its so cold...brr!ReplyDeleteRepliesReplySueann6:13 AMYes! Summer has slipped away before the the sun came up and fall has crept in. Sigh!I so loved summer!Love this one!HugsSueAnnReplyDeleteRepliesReplyAnonymous10:00 AMwe have betrayed nature...yes!ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyLinda Jacobs11:48 AMIt does feel like a betrayal at this time of the year. You capture that sadness so well.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplySusie Clevenger1:16 PMI like this...I hadn't thought of fall as a betrayal, but it is. It tempts with warmth and betrays with chillReplyDeleteRepliesReplyThe Write Girl11:22 PMBeautiful words...you set your words together so perfectly. Nicely written Sandy.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyLinda Bob Grifins Brin Korbetis3:05 PMtrue,we have air conditioner at day time,heater on at night.nature at the turn of the seasons does betray.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyUnknown4:53 PMThis is lovely, simple, direct. And here in the Sonora Desert, we call it blessed relief!ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyHarshad Mehta11:50 PMFall is natural. Love it or not.Love this poem.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyRamesh Sood8:15 AMThat's beautiful...Sandy..ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyPatti11:16 AMSo perfect- this seasonal betrayal- but I have to admit- THIS betrayal I do not mind one bit!ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyAdd commentLoad more... Post a Comment Thanks for being here.